英语二作文

高频出题点（英二）

（基于对张剑、蒋军虎、陈正康等模卷统计分析）

序 言

考研帮基于对张剑、蒋军虎、陈正康等模卷英二大作文部分的数据统计分析，以押题老师所押大作文的主题类型为主线，列出最高频top4押题主题，并围绕这些主题为大家分享相关的观点论述及作文范文。

标红部分为重点词汇，考研er需重点记忆，范文则可根据有下划线标识的文章框架部分着重进行记忆。

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观点论述

1、饮食文化

With the rapid development of the economy and the rising living standard, people's dietary habits and consumption idea （饮食和消费观念） have changed so much that they become more willing to accept Western diet and even prepare it themselves with the help of books on Western food.

随着经济快速发展和生活水平的不断提高，人们的饮食和消费观念发生了改变，更容易接受西方饮食，甚至借助于西餐类图书自己动手烹饪食物。 2、出境旅游

As the living standards of Chinese people have been greatly improved, a growing number of people can afford the travel

abroad. Outbound travel（出境旅游）, has become more attractive to the Chinese since some overseas destinations are not crowded as domestic resorts（中国（景区））, which usually swarm with tourists.

随着中国人的生活水平得到很大提升，越来越多的人能够负担的起出境旅游，出境旅游对中国人更具吸引力，因为一些海外旅游胜地不像中国那样拥挤。国内的旅游景点通常到处都是游客。

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高分热文

不同年龄段的用餐习惯

The graph reflects the dining habit（用餐习惯） of people at different age group. People between 25 and 35 are very likely to eat outside, with 65% of them reporting（表明） their meal outside home while 35 % of them mentioning eating at home. This is totally different from the habit of people between 35 and 45 witnessed（证明） by the graph above.

The phenomenon mainly arises from the fact that family and career identity with the age has been changed. First and foremost, elder people often have become midlevel managers or even

executives who do not need to worry about the uncertain future but get more freedom. Furthermore, as parents of children, they are more likely to prepare healthy diet for the kid, which becomes the top priority（首要任务） in their agenda.

Younger people between 25 and 35 have no more time or energy to make food after a long busy work day, even though sometimes they take the responsibility of child raising. However, in my personal perspective, they should return home to have dinner more frequently. 3

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该图反映了不同年龄阶段的人的用餐习惯。 25到35岁的人喜欢在外面吃饭，其中 65％的人说他们在外面吃饭，仅 35％的人提到在家里吃饭。上图显示，这和35至45岁的人的就餐习惯完全不同。

这种现象的出现主要是因为随着年龄的增长，家庭和事业身份发生了改变。首先，中年人往往已经成为中层管理人员，甚至高管，他们不

用担心未来的不确定性，反而有更多的自由。此外，作为孩子的父母，他们更喜欢为孩子准备健康的饮食，这成为他们每日工作的重中之重。

25到35岁的年轻人经过一天长时间繁忙的工作后，没有更多的时间或精力做饭，尽管有时他们肩负着抚养孩子的责任。但是我认为，他们应该经常回家吃饭。

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观点论述

1、电子商务、网络社交

Mobile e-business（移动电子商务） has greater demand on credit than traditional one, and security is the major problem mobile e-commerce has to address（解决）.

移动电子商务比起传统商务来说，对安全信用要求更高，因此，安全问题是移动电子商务必须努力解决的主要问题。

As a popular social networking app, Weixin has already become the world's biggest messaging platform（社交信息平台）, allowing users to freely transfer pictures, videos or speech, and enabling group chat.

作为一种受欢迎的社交媒体应用，微信已经成为全球最大的社交信息平台，它使得用户能够免费传送照片、视频以及对话，同时也使多人交流成为可能。

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高分热文

中国网民数量变化及原因

It is clear, demonstrated in the chart above, that some changes have taken place in the number of the netizens （网民-新生词汇哦）in China in recent years. Based upon the statistics provided by the chart, one can see that the number of the netizens in the city has been on an ascending trend（上升趋势）all the time. In the year of 2012, the number was merely 50 million, while within no more than several years, it went sharply up to 300 million in 2015. Meanwhile , the rural area has also witnessed a steady increase（稳定增长）, reaching 115 million in 2015.

It is of sensible for me to put forward some contributing factors to account for this situation. At the top of the list, with the pace of life speeding up, the Internet has become increasingly indispensable（必不可少） in our daily life. According to a reliable report, some youngsters might even spend more than 8 hours in surfing（上网） a day. In addition, we must admit that Internet, as a highly efficient means of communication, shortens the distance between

people. Finally, the fact cannot be ignored that the Internet will help us keep up with the latest information wherever we are.

From the discussion mentioned above, we can safely come to the conclusion that this phenomenon is positive and therefore beneficial. And it is sure that this established trend is bound to （必定）continue in the years to come . 3

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上述图表清晰地表明了近年来中国网民数量的变化。根据图表所提供的数据我们可以看到，城市网民的数量一直在快速上升，2012年这

一数字仅仅是5千万，然而短短几年，到2015年就急剧攀升到3亿。与此同时，农村地区也见证了稳步上升的态势，2015年达到1.15亿。

我认为有些因素可以解释这个现象。首先，随着生活节奏的加快，互联网在我们日常生活中变得越来越不可或缺。根据一份可靠的报道，一些年轻人每天上网时间甚至超过8小时。此外，必须承认的是，网络作为一种高效的沟通方式，缩短了人与人之间的距离。最后，不容忽视的事实是，不论我们在哪里，网络可以帮助我们获取最新的信息资讯。

综上所述，我们可以准确得出一个结论：这个现象是积极的，因此也是有益的。我确信在未来若干年这种已形成的趋势还将持续下去。

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观点论述

1、毕业、就业问题

An increasing number of graduates flock to the job market, making fierce the competition and largely pulling down the value of diploma（拉低了文凭的价值）.

越来越多的毕业生涌入职场，让竞争更加激烈，大大拉低了文凭的价值。

With the rapid development of the Chinese higher education, the number of university graduates has been growing significantly.

随着中国高等教育的快速发展，大学生毕业的数量急剧增长。

We must admit that a good many graduates have

turned down-to-earth（务实） and taken a rational and objective attitude towards their ability and value.

我们不得不承认，许多毕业生已变得更务实，对自身能力和价值有一个理性和客观的态度。

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高分热文

中国学生及美国学生收入来源对比

Financial sources of College Students are quite different from those of American students. In China, students get 90% of their money from their parents while in America, only 50% of students` money is provided by parents. In addition, Chinese students earn only 5% of their money from part time jobs and 5% from fellowship or scholarship while income from these two resources for American students takes up （占）35% and 15% respectively of their total income.

I think there are probably three reasons for their differences. First, because of the influence of different social and family values, Chinese students have formed the habit of asking for money from their parents while American students have developed more sense of being financially independent. Second, most Chinese parents devote too much care to their children and they would rather save up to afford their children's education rather than encourage them to take part-time jobs.

But in America, many parents pay more attention to developing the students' ability of self-reliance（自立） ,so they encourage their children to find part-time job to earn some money by

themselves. Third, since America is more developed than China, it is relatively easy for students to find part-time jobs. In China, such opportunities are rather rare.

I believe with the development of China, more and more Chinese students will realize and pay more attention to the necessity

of self-dependence（独立）. In addition, more and more opportunities will be provided for them to take part-time jobs. So, more students will go out of the ivory tower（象牙塔） to broaden their knowledge and to become the master of their own lives. 3

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中国大学生的经济来源和美国大学生的经济来源迥然不同。在中国，学生花费的90%来自父母；但是在美国，只有一半的花费由家里提供。除此之外，中国学生的花费中，仅5%来自兼职，5%来自学术奖金或奖学金；然而美国学生通过这两种办法获得的收入分别占了总收入的35%和15%。

我认为造成这种差异的原因有三个。首先，由于不同社会和家庭价值观的影响，中国学生已经形成了向父母要钱的习惯；而美国学生在经济上更加独立。其次，大多数中国父母对他们的孩子们投入过多的照顾，他们宁愿省下钱来负担孩子的教育，也不鼓励他们做兼职工作。

但在美国，许多家长都更加注重培养学生的自立能力，因此他们鼓励孩子们找兼职，自己赚钱。第三，因为美国比中国发达，美国学生找到兼职工作相对容易。而在中国，这样的机会是相当罕见的。

我相信随着中国的发展，越来越多的中国学生会意识到自我独立的必要性。此外，应为他们提供更多兼职机会。这样，更多的学生将走出象牙塔，拓宽自己的知识，成为自己生活的主人。

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观点论述

1、私家车越来越多

Based on a reliable official report, approximately 55% of the families in big cities have possessed their own motor vehicles.

随着经济的发展，有能力购买私家车的家庭越来越多。 The fact cannot be ignored that the public have yet to improve their sense of environmental protection and drive their private cars less.

不容忽视的事实是，公众仍然需要提高他们的环保意识，尽量少开私家车。

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高分热文

国内汽车产业发展概况分析

As can be seen from the diagram, the auto output of our country grew quickly, from 4 million in 2000 to 25.4 million in 2014. China's share in world auto production also rose by 23% in these past 15 years, to 27% in 2014, which is presented in the graph as well. There is no denying that our country is on the way of being the biggest automobile producer. There are several reasons accounting for this. First of all, with 1.3billion people, china is a huge potential market（潜在市场） for automobile, which causes the year-on-year expansion of domestic car production. In addition, it must be pointed out that with people'sdisposable income（可支配收入） growing and the price domestically-produced cars falling significantly, domestic automobiles entre more and more families as a necessary means of

transportation, thus promoting the auto industry. Finally, our country has designated automobile as a pillar industry for the economy, and has taken a series of steps to vigorously develop the industry. In my personal sense, as a result of the boom in the automobile industry, the total number of vehicles in cities has witnessed a great increase, raising concerns about the environmental pollution and the traffic jams. Therefore, we should take effective measures to, if not avert, mitigate such problems. 3

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从图中可以看出，我国汽车产量增长迅速，从2000年的400万辆增长到2014年的2540万辆。曲线图的数据还显示，15年来我国汽车产量占世界汽车产量的比重增长了23%，2015年达到27%。

毫无疑问，我国正成为最大的汽车生产国之一。这一现象出现的原因有：首先，中国有13亿人口，是汽车销售的巨大的潜在市场，这就造就了国内汽车产量的不断增加；此外，必须指出的是，随着国民可支配收入的增加，以及国产汽车价格大幅下降，汽车作为一种必要的交通工具进入越来越多的家庭，从而推动了汽车行业的发展；最后，我国为将汽车行业作为经济的支柱行业，已采取一系列措施大力发展该行业。

依我之见，汽车行业繁荣造成城市里汽车的总量大增，引起人们对环境污染以及交通拥堵的担忧。所以，我们要采取有效措施，缓解乃至避免这些问题。

2016考研英语 小作文

高频出题点（英二）

（基于对张剑、陈正康、蒋军虎等模卷统计分析）

序 言

考研帮基于对张剑、陈正康、蒋军虎等英二模卷小作文部分的数据统计分析，以所押小作文的主题类型为主线，精心选出了6类主题，并围绕这些主题整理了常用表达和经典范文（含译文）。

必背表达及标红部分的重点词汇，考研er需重点记忆，范文则可根据有下划线标识的文章框架部分着重进行记忆。

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必备表达

1、说明投诉问题

I am writing to inform（告知，代替tell）you that I find…unsatisfactory…

I am writing to express/ air dissatisfaction/ disappointment/ concern regarding … 2、期待解决方案

I hope you will take steps to rectify（纠正、改善，代替improve） this situation soon.

I believe you will take my complaints seriously. I would ask you to give back my money, or I would file my complaint（投诉） to the authorities concerned（相关部门）.

To solve this problem/surmount this difficulty/improve the situation/crack this hard nut（解决问题）, I hope to draw the attention of the authorities concerned.

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高分热文

Dear Mr. President,

My name is Li Ming, a junior of the Civil Engineering School. I venture（冒昧）to write a letter to you about the canteen

service （食堂服务） on campus which has given rise to a lot of complaints among students.

The focus of the complaint is the poor quality of the food. The vegetables are so overcooked as to lose their nutrients. The price of the food is surprisingly high. Besides , the attitude of the service staff to the students is not hospitable （热情）at all.

All in all, there is still much room for improvement as far as the canteen service is concerned. I do hope we will not suffer for another year. Thank you for your kind consideration. Sincerely yours,

Li Ming

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尊敬的校长，

我是土木工程学院大三的李明，我冒昧的给您写信投诉食堂的服务，该服务已经引起了很多学生不满。

投诉的焦点是食品质量差。蔬菜烹饪过头，失去了营养。食品价格也高的出奇。此外，服务人员对学生的态度一点都不热情。

总之，食堂服务还有很大的改善空间。我真心希望不用再忍受一年。感谢您的考虑。

谨致问候，

李明

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必背表达

1、说明目的

I would appreciate very much if you can provide me with more details about…

I have learned from…that you will…I just want to know specifically about…

I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding/concerning… 2、询问事宜

Would you please send me all the information and the forms as soon as possible? Thank you very much.

I would be much obliged（感激）if you let me know the procedures I have to go through. 3、表示感谢、期盼回复

I am expecting your early reply/ your immediate response. Your prompt attention to this letter would be highly appreciated. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Thank you for your consideration.

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高分热文

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am a Chinese student who wishes to pursue further study at your university next semester. It would be highly appreciated if you would provide me with some essential information . First, how much is the tuition fee (学费）? Though I intend to be self-supporting （自费）, I would be interested to know if there is any scholarship available for international students. Second, I wonder whatqualifications （资格） I need to follow a course at your university. Now I have got a master degree in Tsinghua University, is it

enough? Third, as regards to （关于） accommodations, is it possible for me to have a single room?

I am looking forward to your reply, and to attending your esteemed institution （贵校）.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

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尊敬的先生或女士，

我是一名中国学生，希望下学期在贵校深造。如果您能给我提供一些基本信息，我将非常感谢。

首先，学费是多少？尽管我打算自费，但我想知道国际学生能否获得奖学金。其次，我想知道进入贵校需要什么样的资格。现在我在清华大学获得了硕士学位，这样够吗？第三，关于住宿的问题，有可能让我住单人间吗？

期待你的回复，期待成为贵校的一员。

谨致问候，

李明

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必背表达

1、提出请求

Could you please…? Could you possibly…? Would it be possible to…? I would be grateful if you could…? Would you mind doing…?

I wonder if you could spare some time to help me… 2、表达谢意、期盼回复

Thank you for your attention to this matter. I look forward to prompt response.

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Dear Prof. Smith,

I am a senior in the Computer Science Department of Tsinghua University. Now I am writing my graduation thesis and in urgent need of some reference materials （相关信息）so that I write to you for help. The material on the application of computer among university students in America is what I need most. Most importantly, the relevant statistics and reports should cover the past two decades. And all the materials must be publications of national level.

The material which I ask you for will decide the failure or success of my graduation thesis. I have failed to find relevant up-to-date

materials in China. So your help would be much appreciated and I am looking forward to your reply. Sincerely yours,

Li Ming

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尊敬的史密斯教授，

我是清华大学计算机科学系的大四学生。现在正在写毕业论文，迫切需要一些参考材料，因此向您写信求助。

我最需要美国大学生中的计算机应用材料。最重要的是，相关数据和报告要涵盖过去二十年，并且所有的材料必须是国家级出版物。

向您借的材料将决定我毕业论文成败。我在中国没有找到最新的相关资料。所以非常感激您的帮助，期待您的回复。

谨致问候，

李明

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必备表达

1、指出被推荐人

I am writing to you to recommend…for…

I take great pleasure in recommending to you … as … I would like to present… for your consideration in your search for…

With reference to your requirements（要求）, I shall, without reservation（毫无保留）, recommend…as an ideal candidate. 2、总结说明

I am confident/ convinced that… I strongly recommend him to you with no reservation.

Therefore, I do not hesitate to recommend her as an ideal candidate for the post you advertised.

Therefore, I do not hesitate to recommend … as the right person for your consideration.

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高分热文

Dear Prof. Smith,

I am writing to recommend to you Miss Liu Ming who wants to pursue her graduate study for the Master’s Degree under your supervision（监督、管理）.

Miss Liu Ming was one of my classmates in Tianjin University. She was an excellent student in our university as can be seen from her straight A grades on all subjects. After graduation she worked in Tianyi Biological Company for three years, which considerably added to her practical experience（实践经验）.

I think with her intelligence, diligence and rich experience, Miss Liu Ming has great potential in the field of pharmacology both

theoretically and practically. Therefore, I recommend her to you with no reservations（毫无保留）. Faithfully yours,

Li Ming

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尊敬的史密斯教授，

我写信向您推荐刘明小姐，她想在您的指导下攻读硕士学位。 刘明是我在天津大学的同学。她在我们学校成绩优异，各科成绩都是优秀。毕业后，她在天一生物公司工作了三年，积累了很多实践经验。

我认为她聪明、勤奋、富有经验。无论是理论上，还是实践经验上，刘明在药理学领域都有很大的潜力。因此，我毫无保留的向您推荐她。

谨致问候，

李明

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必备表达

1、邀请目的

On behalf of…, I have the honor to invite you to…

It is with the great pleasure that I write to cordially invite you to… It gives me the greatest pleasure to invite you to… We should be very grateful if you could… 2、活动安排

There will be a dinner party to be held at the Beijing Hotel on

Sunday, October 10th, at eight o’clock. Will you and Mrs. Smith come and join us?

I hope that you have no previous engagement and can join us for the English Evening at 7:00 p.m. on February 1st. 3、期盼回复

We are looking forward to seeing you. I do hope that you will be able to come.

We should be very pleased if you could honor us with your company.

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高分热文

Dear Mr. Williams,

I am writing on behalf of（代表） the English Department to invite you to give a lecture in our college.

We know that you are an expert on American literature. As English majors, our students would like to know something about American literature. We would be very grateful（感激、感谢） if you could give a talk on “Contemporary American Literature” to students of the English Department on Saturday, June 4. If this subject does not suit（适合） you, any other similar topic would be welcomed as well.

We have already had several very interesting talks from somedistinguished（尊贵的，知名的） visitors from various countries and we look forward early to the opportunity to benefit from your experience and wisdom. Yours truly,

Li Ming

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尊敬的威廉先生，

我代表英语系给您写信，邀请您来我校开一次讲座。

我们知道您是美国文学方面的专家。作为英语专业的学生，我们想了解一些美国文学知识。如果您能在6月4日，星期六，为英语系学生做一场“当代美国文学”的讲座，我们将非常感激。如果这个主题不适合您，任何其他类似的主题同样受到欢迎。

我们已经同各国到访的贵宾有了几次非常有趣的交谈，期待着早日有机会受教于您的经验和智慧。

谨致问候，

李明

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必背表达

1、表示感谢

I warmly appreciate your hospitality（款待）. I am writing to express my thanks for …

I am writing to extend my sincere/hearty gratitude/appreciation（真诚的感谢）for …说明事由

Thank you very much for the gift you sent me. It’s one of the most wonderful gifts I got on my birthday.

I am writing this letter to thank you for your warm hospitality accorded to me and my delegation during our recent visit to your beautiful country. I would also like to thank you for your interesting discussion with me which I have found very informative and useful. 2、再次表示感谢

Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Thanks again and I hope that I will have the opportunity to return/repay your kindness.

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高分热文

Dear John,

I am writing to thank you for looking after me after that unfortunate accident the other day, when I was knocked off my bike by a taxi. But for your assistance, I fear that the consequence might have been much more serious. The doctor says that my broken leg is healing well, and that I would be able to stand up again in a week’s time. In addition, the taxi company has agreed to pay my hospital bills.

Anyway, everyone agrees that it was your quick-witted response in thatemergence that has led to this satisfactory outcome （满意的结果）. I feel I owe you so much, so please accept my most sincere thanks. Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

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亲爱的约翰，

写信是要感谢你在我不幸事故之后对我的照顾，几天前，一辆出租车撞了我的自行车，我摔了下来。要不是你的帮助，恐怕后果会更加严重。

医生说我受伤的腿恢复的很好，一周之内我就能站起来了。而且，出租车公司也同意支付住院费用。

无论如何，每个人都认为是你在危机关头的机智的反应才有今天满意的结果。我觉得欠你很多，所以请接受我最真挚的感谢。

谨致问候，

李明