2024届高考英语作文复习专项：读后续写之朋友重归于好好词好句学案素材

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

“Why she let out my secret? Why she did that to me?” I vividly remembered that day when I was confused at the knowing looks everyone gave me. That terrible experience was impressed on my mind. I couldn’t forgive the person with whom I had shared my secret. She lost all my trust and friendship.

Five years back, Sally was a new addition in our class. There was something mysterious about her that attracted me towards her. She was the most friendly person I had known. We started as classmates but after a few months we were like best friends. We did homework together and dreamed of going to the same university one day. We hung out and went to the movies on weekends. That was a sweet time.

Nevertheless, I couldn’t expect such an enormous betrayal(背叛)from her. I didn’t know what made me tell Sally about my personal life. I felt much regret to myself. She added her own spices to it and made it the hottest topic in school. It was like someone had stabbed(戳) a knife in my back. After she let out my secret, everyone at school started laughing at me and gazing at me whenever I passed. I was like a pond in which someone had thrown a stone and it had been spilled up. Soon afterwards, I left school and shifted to another one, because I couldn’t bear the pain any more. Sally called me many times. However, I didn’t answer and deleted all her contact information. My heart was broken because the person whom I trusted most cheated me.

I made efforts to remove the scar from my heart. I started a new life, leaving all the bad memories behind, because they made me a person who often thought about the past experiences. Five years later, with the life going on, I made new friends and seldom thought about the past. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1

But one day I happened to get the shocking truth from Helen, my former classmate. _______________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2

I immediately called Sally in order to break up the misunderstanding.

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Paragraph 1：But one day I happened to get the shocking truth from Helen, my former classmate. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________

Paragraph 2:I immediately called Sally in order to break up the misunderstanding._____________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________

文章分析：

作者跟Sally结为好友，跟她分享自己私密事情，结果秘密被同学知道，并且害的作者被同学嘲笑，所以作者就转学，之后Sally打电话，作者也不接，在后来一次遇到以前同学Helen，她才知道事情的故事。

续写情节：

大白——打电话——道歉——重归于好——感悟

参考范文：

But one day I happened to get the shocking truth from Sally, my former classmate. Helen said that after I left school the gossip gradually escaped everyone in our school, but it indeed posed a mental torture to Sally. And unexpectedly, I was told that Sally was not the one who brought my secret to light. Instead, it was Anna who had a big mouth and always wanted to spy on other people’s private affairs. She overheard my conversation with sally that day. Heart plunging, I was at sea, feeling that I was thunderstruck. Anxious and regretful, I asked Helen for any possible contact with Sally and I was given her old phone number she was still using.

I immediately called Sally in order to break up the misunderstanding. After getting through, I conveyed my genuine apology to her. She paused initially and then replied mildly, “Nothing matters as long as we remain close friends as before. Having received her forgiveness, I was in tears of guilt and relief, wishing the misunderstanding had not happened. I wished time could go back and I could fix my mistakes. It really dawned on me that a little mistake could spoil what we tirelessly constructed, but it was frank communication that served as a magic glue which restored what we truly treasured.

范文：

Paragraph 1: But one day I happened to get the shocking truth from Sally, my former classmate. Helen said that after I left school the gossip gradually escaped everyone in our school, but it indeed posed a mental torture to Sally. And unexpectedly, I was told that Sally was not the one who brought my secret to light. Instead, it was Anna who had a big mouth and always wanted to spy on other people’s private affairs. She overheard my conversation with sally that day. Heart plunging, I was at sea, feeling that I was thunderstruck. Anxious and regretful, I asked Helen for any possible contact with Sally and I was given her old phone number she was still using.

Paragraph 2: I immediately called Sally in order to break up the misunderstanding. After getting through, I conveyed my genuine apology to her. She paused initially and then replied mildly, “Nothing matters as long as we remain close friends as before. Having received her forgiveness, I was in tears of guilt and relief, wishing the misunderstanding had not happened. I wished time could go back and I could fix my mistakes. It really dawned on me that a little mistake could spoil what we tirelessly constructed, but it was frank communication that served as a magic glue which restored what we truly treasured.

范文：

Paragraph 1: But one day I happened to get the shocking truth from Sally, my former classmate. Helen said that after I left school the gossip gradually escaped everyone in our school, but it indeed posed a mental torture to Sally. And unexpectedly, I was told that Sally was not the one who brought my secret to light. Instead, it was Anna who had a big mouth and always wanted to spy on other people’s private affairs. She overheard my conversation with sally that day. Heart plunging, I was at sea, feeling that I was thunderstruck. Anxious and regretful, I asked Helen for any possible contact with Sally and I was given her old phone number she was still using.

Paragraph 2: I immediately called Sally in order to break up the misunderstanding. After getting through, I conveyed my genuine apology to her. She paused initially and then replied mildly, “Nothing matters as long as we remain close friends as before. Having received her forgiveness, I was in tears of guilt and relief, wishing the misunderstanding had not happened. I wished time could go back and I could fix my mistakes. It really dawned on me that a little mistake could spoil what we tirelessly constructed, but it was frank communication that served as a magic glue which restored what we truly treasured.

读后续写Ⅲ—朋友重归于好篇好词好句

1. let out one’s secret 泄露某人的秘密 2. knowing looks 会意的/心照不宣的表情 3. hang out 闲逛

4. gaze at sb/sth 盯着某人/某物 5. bear the pain 忍受痛苦 6. contact information 联系方式

7. remove the scar from my heart 消除我心中的伤疤

8. leave all the bad memories behind 把所有不好的回忆抛之脑后 9. pose a mental torture to sb 对某人造成精神折磨 10. bring the secret to light 让秘密大白于天下 11. break up the misunderstanding 12. get through 接通，打通

13. convey my genuine apology to sb 向某人表达我真诚的歉意 14. fix my mistakes 纠正我的错误

15. I felt much regret to myself. 我对自己感到非常后悔。 16. She added her own spices(香料) to it. 她对此添油加醋。

17. It was like someone had stabbed(戳) a knife in my back.就好像有人在背后捅了我一刀。 18. The gossip(流言蜚语) gradually escaped everyone in our school. 我们学校每个人都渐渐知道了这个流言

19. it was Anna who had a big mouth and always wanted to spy on other people’s private affairs. 安娜是个大嘴巴，总是向窥探别人的私事。

have a big mouth 大嘴巴；多舌 spy on 窥探 private affairs 私事

20. Heart plunging, I was at sea, feeling that I was thunderstruck. 我的心猛地一沉，完全不知所措，仿佛被雷击了。

21. Anxious and regretful, I asked Helen for any possible contact with Sally. 怀着焦虑和遗憾，我问海伦与莎莉的任何可能的联系方式。

22. Having received her forgiveness, I was in tears of guilt and relief, wishing the misunderstanding had not happened.

得到她的原谅后，我流下了内疚和宽慰的泪水，（我多么）希望没有发生误会。 23. It really dawned on me that a little mistake could spoil(破坏，毁掉) what we tirelessly constructed, but it was frank communication that served as a magic glue which restored what we truly treasured. 我真的意识到，一个小小的错误可能会破坏我们不知疲倦地建立起来的东西，但正是坦诚的沟通充当了一种神奇的粘合剂，修复了我们真正珍惜的东西。 dawn on sb 使开始明白，使开始理解

续写之朋友重归于好好词好句默写

1. 使开始明白，使开始理解

9. 联系方式

2. 不知所措 10. 接通，打通

3. 向某人表达我真诚的歉意 11. 盯着某人/某物

4. 心照不宣的表情 12. 对某人造成精神折磨

5. 忍受痛苦 13. 消除我心中的伤疤

6. 纠正我的错误 14. 让秘密大白于天下

7. 泄露某人的秘密

8. 把所有不好的回忆抛之脑后

15. 我的心猛地一沉，完全不知所措，仿佛被雷击了。

16. 得到她的原谅后，我流下了内疚和宽慰的泪水，（我多么）希望没有发生误会。

17. 我对自己感到非常后悔。

18. 但正是坦诚的沟通充当了一种神奇的粘合剂，修复了我们真正珍惜的东西。